Love Poem Contest
QtheC suggested this contest: “Lonelygirl15 Character Love Poem Contest” - write a love poem from one lonelygirl15 character to another lonelygirl15 character. The winning entry will receive a signed cast photograph and copy of their poem.
Post your entries in the comments below or send to amanda@eqal.com. Entries must be submitted by this Friday at 11:59 pm PST.
July 22nd, 2008 at 1:56 pm
Awesome, I’m definitely in … but what I really want to do is write a love poem from Jennie to me and have her read it to me.
July 22nd, 2008 at 2:02 pm
Is this thing working?
July 22nd, 2008 at 2:03 pm
From Sarah to Bree
My love for you is like the cut on my wrist
Painful yet serene
Oh Moonchild where did you go?
The touch of cold steel haunts me still
You may walk beyond the grave
But yet I still hear you
For, in death we are as one.
July 22nd, 2008 at 2:10 pm
I couldn’t resist your hard, dark eyes
or your silent, serious ways.
You never spoke meanly or told me lies
all your quiet, lonely days.
If I had to do it all over again,
not knowing what was in store,
I’d stay in my bedroom, O friend,
and make out with my sweet loving Thor.
(Bree to Thor)
July 22nd, 2008 at 2:12 pm
Sorry, MM - something in your poem got flagged as spam. It’s up now!
July 22nd, 2008 at 2:23 pm
from emma to gina:
the wind blows through the trees
you were like a sister to me
the dirt was thrown into the ground
but a body wasn’t anywhere to be found
your sweet face was gone
the smile that was always there
i turned around and it was gone
sweet gina, oh where have you gone?
nothing is the same here anymore
i had to leave this place and time
to come back i dont know when
its hard for me to remember you
when i know your not here
but wherever you are, promise me, promise all of us
to not fade away
July 22nd, 2008 at 4:56 pm
“Already Lost”
I risk scorn from the others as I leave this for you,
A child’s foolish dream of a brighter future.
I have watched through these years, have seen you wilt
As time and time again you pick up pieces of your soul,
Wondering how many times one’s life can be shattered
And still willingly carry on each day.
After all this time, I know you the best out of all.
Not the beast, whose questions you dodged then and now
Not the broken girl, whom you dismiss as a mistake
Not the lover, whom you keep away in order to keep at all.
Two years, seven hundred thirty days – does it matter how it is counted?
Enough time, plenty of time, to realize we are one and the same.
Once the first to offer a smile, sing a laugh
Slowly jaded with the world we once loved.
Haunted by faces when eyes are closed,
Remembering the times we could not save them.
Discovering secrets until they are no longer shocking,
Dully musing on a midnight future.
Keeping the metal wand by our side,
The driftwood we cling to in the storm
Leverage that goes unused, annoying the troops
For they will never understand that “Maybe,
if I just had it on that day,
maybe she would still be alive.”
A thin line we balance on, keeping our chins stubbornly out
Never looking down, wearing the blood like war paint.
Doubting your heart will ever beat once more.
And with every tick of the clock, time goes by
Pain cuts deeper until you cannot remember anything else.
Are the two armies so different from each other?
Children play war in front of your dwelling,
Running with fingers pointed into guns.
They see fun, they believe it is pretend.
In the end, it does not matter what side you are on
For the opposition will be just as cruel.
There will be no victory, there will only be sacrifices.
Everyone will lose – have we not already?
(Lucy to Jonas)
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:25 pm
can we submit more than one amanda?
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:40 pm
I love your curly hair.
My fingers feel so good there.
I growl like a bear.
(Jenny to Jonas…or Jonas to Jenny… either way!)
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:55 pm
My mouth salivates
as I ponder your sweet
yet sinister solution.
All of a sudden
sprinting through back alleys,
leaping over tall picket fences,
hacking into computers ,
and squealing away in my getaway car,
make me crave
the touch of your
cool smooth pucker
and the feeling of
your juicy tingle
slip-n-sliding
down my throat.
It makes me wonder
if addiction to a life of Evil
is really all that bad,
if it provides a refreshing
citrus salvation.
(Daniel’s Ode to the Evil Orange Slurpee) =P
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:58 pm
Daniel to Sarah
Sorry for calling you a crazy emo chick
Though you did fool me with your lipstick
Sorry for my big crush on Bree
Though I thought I loved she
You now posses my love
This you must see
Many crushes have passed
Gina, Mallory, even Bree
I will not leave you
Even if your dad is a nut
I love you forever
No matter what
July 22nd, 2008 at 6:02 pm
Jennie to Jonas:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I’m not a plantcake
But I sure love you
July 22nd, 2008 at 6:20 pm
I lie in the still of desolate darkness. The still of the night makes me ache
Doing this on my own was a mission of madness and all I can see is her face
An anger consumes me. It swallows me whole like a savage stricken beast
Rabid and longing to venture and hunting to rectify justice for Bree…
Jenny,…sweet Jenny…It has to be hard to love me the way that you do
When I risk life for answers and all that I’m after. Still, all the while you remain true
And I’m cold as ice when I dont know my way, vicious, sleepless and raging
With every hear beat and breath lept of my lips, you still find something in me worth saving
I’ve buckled under pressure like a thin sheet of glass shattering beneath the weight
of a destiny before me and the will to make life better for these girls…of a positive trait.
A love long lost was torn from me. The one I couldn’t protect.
I watched her die. I felt her anguish, yeilding to elders in death
I see her in my mind, her eyes calling out to me, her voice a constant echo in my head
I struggle with the notion still of letting her go…in loving another instead.
And still you stood beside me like a calming voice of reason
with the patience to sustain me in the recklessness, forgiving & aid to my mission
This isn’t what you signed on for, all the chaos we’ve endured
with a death mark on my name and no promise of tomorrow not to mention the fact that I’m scared.
Scared to death to let go, scared to leave you alone, scared to love and to lose it again
I’m a complicated man with your heart in my hands and I know when you cry I’m the reason
What I mean to say is that I’m thankful…and I’m sorry for rambling on
But I’m lucky you’re still here to love me now and long after the order…is gone…
(from Jonas to Jenny when he left to seek out the resistance members on his own after they broke up)
July 22nd, 2008 at 6:23 pm
the first line was suppose to be “I lie in the -thick- of desolate darkness, the still of the night makes me ache” <.< typo haha sorrryy
July 22nd, 2008 at 6:29 pm
Damn it… I messed up my haiku.
It’s supposed to read:
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Love your curly hair.
My fingers feel so good there.
I growl like a bear.
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July 22nd, 2008 at 6:35 pm
Bree,
You mean so much to me and my love for you well never die, even thou you are gone you well always stay in my heart, Even thou it seems like i moved on,You well always have a special place tucked away in my heart, I love you and always well love you.
Love
Jonas
(To: Bree From: Jonas)
July 22nd, 2008 at 7:06 pm
From Daniel to Bree (his feelings right after her death)
The Reminder
It has never been so quiet
Not in my entire life
But I long for this sweet silence
Sound cuts me like a knife
For everything I hear reminds me of you
You were the color in my world
Now I see in black and white
The tears do not stop flowing
So I shut my eyes tight
For everything I see reminds me of you
My body does not move
Longing for the state you’re in
I let the numbness over take me
Until I don’t have any skin
For everything I feel reminds me of you
I cannot hear, see, or feel
I am as good as dead
Sometimes I wonder if
I Should let my wrists run red
But I remember what you said to me
And I will never forget
“Find other girls and help them”
And that keeps me going yet
So I will not give up
For the promise I have made
I will not stop
Until the Order fades
This will be hard
You are gone, not in my view
I must come alive again
Even though everything reminds me of you
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:01 pm
(daniel to sarah)
(love sonnet)
my sarah, you are something like a rose.
your thorns are sharp, and they can make me bleed
but nonetheless i want to hold you close.
our love, it grew from such a tiny seed.
the first time that we were together i
was mourning the life of my best friend bree
i still lament it was her time to die
but you are now so important to me
admittedly we’ve had our ups and downs
you are, however, killer of my frowns
lol oh dear
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:05 pm
Sarah —> Daniel
Oh, Danny boy
So consumed, so naive
in your pure love for her
But I lured you away, didn’t I?
Off the beaten straight and narrow path.
I’d like to think so.
And you, in turn, turned me around.
Turned on the fire inside and warmed my heart.
And still, it killed to see you torn
to know I’d always lose you
to her
to “justice”
to my own flawed pride and insecurities.
Will I ever have the whole of you?
Or am I grasping at clouds like, “forever”
Clinging to your frame
solid, strong, secure
while the rest of you is ripped from me
by the unsympathetic
Greater Cause.
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:46 pm
Joe wrote this poem (posted on the LG15 Today):
Joe said…
Daniel to Jonas
Roses are red violets are blue,
Lets ditch Jennie and Sarah and go to the zoo.
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:53 pm
Daniel to Jonas:
Roses are red violets are blue,
Lets ditch Jennie and Sarah and go to the zoo.
July 22nd, 2008 at 8:54 pm
(This poem was posted anonymously on LG15 Today):
Anonymous said… From Taylor to Jonas
I loved you so Jonas
I held in your guts
When that darn shadow
Tried to kill you
I held out my heart
That wasn’t too SMRT
It got crushed and ignored
–didn’t thrill you
Now my daddy’s
A baddy
My mom’s still a slut
And the four of you are <3ing
Don’t expect me to wait for you
Jonas, too late for you
I’m sailing away
With Spencer today
On a ship they call MaxterBexter
July 22nd, 2008 at 9:19 pm
You cover me
And shade my eyes,
Protect from UV rays
And complete my disguise.
To my finished picture
You are the frame.
When I point my gun
Together, we aim.
You perfect my
Suave sense of style,
From my all-black wardrobe
To my evil smile.
We’ve been together
From the very start.
You and I,
We shall never depart.
From over my ears
To the bridge of my nose,
You’re my favorite eyewear
Wherever I go.
-Lucy to her Sunglasses
July 22nd, 2008 at 11:55 pm
Superhero-To Jennie, from Jonas
I’m always out to save the world…
I choose to fight when you want me to fly
I choose to stare mortality right in the eye
I avenge the ghosts of girls other than you
And you always stay with me, while knowing it’s true
You will always want the best for me
You choose to stay when everyone says leave
Some might say that you’re naiive
Because in a superhero you believe
So
I can be Superman if you’re Lois Lane
I will be Spiderman if you’re Mary-Jane
And I pray that someday you’ll take my name
Because we can win this superhero game…
July 23rd, 2008 at 12:04 am
You guys should have an LG15 contest with the PMonkey puppet as the prize
haha
July 23rd, 2008 at 2:40 am
from- a watcher in love with Sarah
to- well… Sarah =]
eyes wide open, all the time
like Mr. Johnny Cash i keep my eyes wide open all the time
its my job and my duty, but i fell in love with you, your prime
I watch and I pray
That maybe someday
It will be safe enough for me to show my eyes
Through this jumbled mix of turncoats and lies
Of plants, and bugs, and following you
These kinds of feelings should never brew
Im hostile, you’re free
And this love could never be
Im just a peeping tom to what goes on
In your everyday sing and everyday song
I’ve chased immortality for most of my years
Now I know you and death is no longer one of my fears
Im no good, your pretty
Im evil, and shitty
Don’t think I’d die to defy the order
But I’d do it for you, Sarah, my almost lover
July 23rd, 2008 at 6:45 am
A Testament of Love: From P. Monkey to Bree
There once was a girl named Bree,
Who used to play with a purple monkey (that’s me).
We would all dance around, to various artists that she found,
And bake cookies for the Daniel Beast.
She proved her love to me time and again,
By covering my ears, not to hear some foolish British girl’s jeers,
Who wasn’t really British at the least (that *cough*).
The laughs that we shared, The little things you did to show you cared,
Those memories will cease to ever erase.
I must admit other girls have tried to take your place,
Like this other trait positive girl and a hot emo nut case,
But neither of them could compare to your beautiful grace.
Now I sit all alone, in a box below this dude’s bed,
Who once loved you almost as much as I did.
Oh how I long for those days, for those hours we’d play,
And make videos for the world to see.
I Love You Bree.
July 23rd, 2008 at 6:47 am
I agree with Nick I’d love P Monkey
lol, but hey he might be going to the new show…you never know (hehe)
July 23rd, 2008 at 9:38 am
Be Your Man
From Ted McKinley To Sarah
(inspired by Am I A Criminal?, Jan. 19, 2008)
(sung to the tune of Piano Man, by Billy Joel)
It was 3pm on a saturday
You broke in my apartment
You said you were looking, for your cat
You were hot, but acting demented
You said your cat “Sniffles” is missing
So i tried to help you
As I gazed at your hair and took you upstairs
Just to show you the view
L L L, G G G
L L G G G fifteen…
Give me a kiss, you’re that Sarah girl
Yes, I watch teh youtube
Well, I knew you would try to play me
But I’m mesmerized by your boobs
Now Dr. Hart is a friend of mine
He gets me my trait positive girls
But he’s in quite a fix ’cause he has some ethics
But I can show you the world
I say, Sarah, Verdus is killing me
But you bring a smile to my face
Well, I’m sure we both could be movie stars
If you and I kissed and embraced
Oh, L L L, G G G
L L G G G … fifteen
Now, we may be on different teams now
But i want you to be my wife
You left the hymn of one, just come back hon’,
And we’ll be together for life.
And I’m done with these Order politics
And the girls who we suck dry
The elders share a drink called lonelygirl,
But I’d rather sing our kids lullabyes
So, give me a kiss, dearest sarah
I’ve always watched you on teh youtube
We can give up this very silly charade
Forget about Daniel, that nOOb
So, its turned out to be a pretty good saturday?
I hope you will give me a smile
Cause you know that its me you’re really coming to see
To make both our lives worthwhile.
And the organ will sound at our wedding,
More happiness that we’ve ever known,
If you just admit, you and I are IT,
We’ll tie the knot if the last episode.
Love,
Ted
July 23rd, 2008 at 10:34 am
From Jennie to Jonas
Hands lapsed
Over mine
Entwined
Fingers tight
Pulsating
The smooth flow of life and warmth
It would be enough
To have seen you
Breathed the same chilled air your lungs rejected
Back to the atmosphere
To never know a warm embrace
Move my hands over taut skin spread tight
To bone
But one touch was enough
Send me soaring
A look could never suffice
Not when I die
Yearn for your companionship
Over the hill
Or through a camera screen
July 23rd, 2008 at 10:52 am
Ever since You left It has Not Been The Same
And All I can Think Is Who’s To Blame. .
Theres The Order Who Took You
And Lucy Who Betrayed You
But Still I Can’t Help But Be Blue
And Think If Only I was on cue
I could Of Been There On Time
And Stopped It all
The Worry,The Pain,The Crime
But i have to stand tall
I Miss You Every Moment Of Every Day.
I Miss you bree,In All Different ways,
You Have My Heart Ans Soul at Bay
And Will through all the lovely days.
July 23rd, 2008 at 10:55 am
Dear Jonas,
Your arms cradled me at night
As you screamed for my best friend,
Our relationship was a secret one,
But it was true.
I remember how you used to be,
You would always slip your fingers
Into my hole and play with me.
Remember when DanielBeast caught us,
We were kissing in the night,
That was before IT happened…
Now we’re so busy fighting The Order,
You never play with me how you used to.
We’ll take down The Order
And you will be in my hole again.
Forever your greatest lover,
P. Monkey.
July 23rd, 2008 at 12:24 pm
From Jennie to Jonas,
Every time you’re with me
You take my breathe away
I go to sleep at night
Thinking of what you say
You give all you got
To everything you do
Now I want to give you back
A love that is so true
I cannot tell you
How much you mean to me
But I promise you
I give you all of thee
To live is to love
So I have been told
If this is true
Then to you my heart is sold
If you get this poem
Please let me know
That you will be there for me
And you will love me so
With All My Love,
Jennie
July 23rd, 2008 at 12:27 pm
lol. i had dirty thoughts along the line of sephern’s poem too. but no reference to spotted dick?
July 23rd, 2008 at 2:53 pm
lol, P Monkey may have missed the whole spotted dick reference bein gstuck under jonas’s bed…
July 23rd, 2008 at 5:12 pm
well, i know i already posted something up there, but this doesnt really count if you dont want it to
i just want to know how it is. and im too lazy to have it up at the forums. soo sorry if i posted more than once if i wasnt allowed too <_<
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away from here
i believed you
when you told me
that you’d be here
now and always
now your fading
away from here
and i cant hide my eyes anymore
they’re going to have to see the tears i cry
and i would give up everything, everything
just to have you back here right now
i would give up everything just to have you here
now im walking down the street. between some buildings
and our eyes don’t seem to meet, but i see you waiting
if i could only turn this vision to life, i would..give up everything
and i cant hide my eyes anymore
they’re going to have to see the tears i cry
i would give up everything, oh everything to have you here right now…
and i cant seem to live
i cant seem to go on
i cant seem to run, from the imagine of you, your haunting me
and i cant seem to hide my eyes anymore
i know they’re going to see the tears i cry
i would give up every single thing i own to have you back here with me
and i believed you, when you told me you’d be here, now and always
now your fading, away from here but i still see you waiting.
- michiev.
July 23rd, 2008 at 6:02 pm
From Daniel To Bree:
You were a lonely girl,
but you were the center of my world.
With you I was never sad,
though sometimes you made me mad.
Whether it be proving science wrong,
or making the “Grillz” song,
we always had fun,
but soon we had to run.
We had to go away,
but together you and I stayed.
You were so innocent and young,
but you had to run from the eternal song.
Then you left,
to go to your eternal rest,
you died to save me,
an act of such bravery,
I will always love you Bree Avery.
July 23rd, 2008 at 6:31 pm
Jonas, my heart beats for you
Jonas, my eyes see only you
Jonas, my body breathes for you
Jonas, I live for you
Jonas, though we’re apart
I beg you, please don’t break my heart
Your eyes pierce me like a dart
Please stay safe and be smart
Jonas, they say “the one” you could be
Jonas, you’ve always been the one for me
Jonas, from the Order you won’t flee
Jonas, I love you, don’t you see
Jonas, please help me find a way
I don’t want to be apart another day
Jonas, please find me and say
“Together, forever, we will stay”
Jonas, my heart beats for you
Jonas, my eyes see only you
Jonas, my body breathes for you
Jonas, I live to love you
July 23rd, 2008 at 9:18 pm
Sarah to Daniel Love Letter
Daniel, words can’t begin to explain
the way you make me feel.
I always thought I was terribly plain,
but now, what’s the deal?
Never before have I thought myself worthy
of someone as true as you.
But something deep inside screams “I’m filthy!”
and continues to make me blue.
I thought Carl was the only one to understand me,
the only one to truly care.
Little did I know you liked me more than Mallory,
who doesn’t deserve to breathe the same air.
It’s been two years since we met
on a quest to save an innocent girl,
but I can only hope that you’ll let
your emotions for me unfurl.
You keep me safe
while we fight the evil cult.
You keep me sane
when we seem to lose by default.
I’m not always this mushy.
Come on, I think we all know that.
At least at night you find me cushy,
and you still snore even when flat…
But if the end soon does come
I just want you to know a few small words.
We set a beat on our own drum,
and luckily scare away all the dangerous birds.
Love me.
Need me.
Keep me.
You’re all I’ll ever need.
July 23rd, 2008 at 11:42 pm
My dearest Bree,
I think about you all the time
And your stupid puppet just reminds me of you
no matter how much I resist.
You’re blood is left on my hands, unable to be washed off,
it’s what fuels my need for revenge, my need to give you vengence.
This endless fight I’m in is dedicated to you.
No one has ever been so close to me, and no one so far.
You’re the puzzle piece that never fit,
and you’re the mystery I hunger to solve.
I am still in the same a deep well of love for you,
you’re an irreplacable gem.
No matter what I do, I can’t help but stay devoted to you,
and wherever you are, I hope you know I’d do anything for you.
Love,
Jonas
July 24th, 2008 at 5:14 am
I miss your soft hands
did you forget?
last your spoke my name was in the sand
did you regret?
You think im dead
thinking of you makes me go bright red
(Bree to Jonas)
(thats all i could think of lol)
July 24th, 2008 at 5:32 am
From Jonas to Bree.
While I sleep,
I keep your tiny friend close to me.
Close to my heart.
He brings you to me in my dreams.
But it will never be enough.
Because it is oh so painful to know,
you, will never be, here, with me, it seems.
I’ve sent my heart beating ahead,
Which I hope you would’ve wanted, for me to live and love.
I shall never again fill the place in my life, in my heart, where you once stood.
I hope you’ll wait for me.
I love you, my beautiful,
Bree Avery.
July 24th, 2008 at 7:47 am
I posted this elsewhere but I wanted to make sure it didnt get left out so im posting it here too…
Sometimes you can be hard to manage.
Sometimes you can be in total disarray.
Sometimes your simply perfection
Sometimes I see you laying there in that oh so sexy way.
Sometimes your my biggest asset.
Sometimes my biggest foe.
Sometimes I want to cut you.
Sometimes I want to just watch you grow.
Sometime life is too hard and
Sometimes I live with despair.
But I keep on going knowing that I have you.
You are my EPIC head of hair
- From Jonas to his hair.
July 24th, 2008 at 10:08 am
From Jennie to Jonas
We first met as you fought The Order,
Who ran my camp across the Border.
When you were hurt I drove you home in your SUV,
but I didn’t save you, you saved me.
You gave me a purpose, love, a home.
Finally I could cease to roam.
I’ve found the life that makes me care,
I’ll stay with you, and your curly hair.
July 24th, 2008 at 10:51 am
To Jenny from Jonas
Love has a setting quality
as the season of an an early May morning
Lost in life in the wind in the bustle of ORDER
the wind brought me you the wind brought me light
ODER is chaos you are my anchor
my soul held down the wind can take me anywhere
you my light shine upon the wind
the wind that takes
takes love
takes family
took faith
I endure
I fight
I fall
I LOVE
July 24th, 2008 at 2:17 pm
(I decided to set my little poem to music….)
From Beast to His Ladies
To the tune: “To All The Girls I’ve Loved Before” - Julio Iglesias
To the lonely girls, i’ve loved before,
One was sweet, and one a whore.
I dedicate this vid,
to my overactive id.
And the lonely girls, i’ve loved before.
To the lonely girls, i’ve fought beside,
We didn’t get anywhere, but we tried.
With you I became kinda cool,
I got in and out of film school.
The lonely girls, i’ve fought beside.
To the lonely girl, i couldn’t save,
Who sacrificed herself, so brave.
My only one true love,
Jonas took advantage of,
The lonely girl, i couldn’t save.
July 24th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
This is a really bad poem.
But here ya go.
(Dr Hart to Gina)
Sweet Elixir. Yevgeny.
Trusting eyes of a child.
Unquestioning, until
the needle penetrates
your flawless, young skin.
Do you see a monster
through those tears?
Your glassy gaze,
so pure, and yet so angry.
And when you smile at me,
what do you see?
A father? A lover? A friend?
Can you see through my masquerade?
Sometimes I lose sight of you,
On the other side of foggy glass.
A wall thickened by cowardice.
One day, it will shatter.
One day, we will escape all of this
together.
For now, let’s skate on thin ice.
And imagine skating away.
July 24th, 2008 at 9:58 pm
(From Daniel to Sarah)
My dearest Sarah…
It may have started with a tube of lipstick to the back
But baby now you’ve got this beast ready to attack
And while that twit Carl may have charmed you with his Spanish
When times got tough it was easy for him to vanish
But darling you’ve come so far since “Sluttiness Prevails”
Your many…many past loves are minute details
So let us move on from all of our past pains
Hold on tight Sarah! You’re taking a ride on the D-train!!
July 24th, 2008 at 11:10 pm
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
P.Monkey’s purple,
and Randy’s not good at poetry.
July 25th, 2008 at 10:27 am
From Virgil to Emma:
“Watcher I am”
When you took your first steps, I looked in from the alley
As you spoke your first words, I made a quick talley
On your third birthday, I bought you ‘Big Bear’
with video eyes, and a microphone ear
when you told Bear stories, and played peek-a-boo
I was there listening, peeking back at you
Remember that fire, and all those alarms?
I went into the smoke, carried you out in my arms
And when you drew angels, in black tie and black suit
I have to admit, I found it quite cute
That time when those boys pushed you right off the swings
I helped the young bullies understand a few things
when you tipped your canoe, toppled into the drink
I dove in shoes and all, as quick as a wink
I checked for danger, before you entered a room
Any who harmed you, heard my hymn of doom
When Jonas fell for LaResizto’s snare,
I tried to protect you, and not interfere
But when Claire threatened to shoot you dead,
I got that ‘b’ first, one shot to the head
From William Porter, to save you I tried,
and in the process, I finally died
Why did I do it? you ask little lamb
Just doin’ my job maam, Watcher I am.
To serve in this way, was for me no dilemma
The daughter I’d wish for, would have been Emma.
July 25th, 2008 at 11:18 am
Thats a GREAT poem, Loretta! I love all the imagery. VERY NICE!!!
July 25th, 2008 at 12:06 pm
I always loved those shades you wore,
And although my love was so wrong,
It was always you I would adore,
Oh my Grwatcher, this is your song.
My first day could have been my last,
Surrounded by the enemy,
But then you arrived, ever so fast,
You shot them down, you saved me.
So yeah those shades you wear all day
Taught me a whole new meaning to ’style’.
And you said to me, said “Ooh, Lucy,
Yeah, what number do I dial?”
So I let you have my number,
And after that it was all well,
You phoned, we Bree’d, thanks to Taylor,
My love for you began to swell.
And then came along that Virgil.
Virgil, he wore shades just like you,
And there’s no doubt had no hair too.
You thought ‘competition anew!’,
And with your gun his head you blew.
Then that gun turned on it’s owner
Who did not want “Order-Prison”,
You did it to keep your honor;
So it happened - your decision,
I’ll not forget the times we had,
The girls we got, the love we made,
Although wearing them makes me sad,
I’ll not take them off: those black shades.
From Lucy to the “Grwatcher”, the Greg-Watcher.
July 25th, 2008 at 12:10 pm
A haiku from Bree’s Dad, Drew Avery, to Bree:
Proving Science Wrong
A Geography Lesson
Bree’s Widely Spaced Eyes
July 25th, 2008 at 12:11 pm
Hey! Hey! Jonas!
I don’t like your Jennie!
No way! No way!
I think you need a Nikki,
Hey! Hey! Jonas!
I could be your Nikki…
Hey! Hey! Jonas
I know that you don’t like Jennie,
No way! No way!
You just love this Nikki,
Hey! Hey! Jonas!
I want to be your Nikki…
You’re so fine
I want you mine
I watch you topless,
“Morning After”,”Morning Glory”,
They’re so addictive…
July 25th, 2008 at 12:14 pm
Aw, that’s so sweet, QtheC! Very inventive, yet completely true to the characters and story. Awesome!
July 25th, 2008 at 2:02 pm
Gina to Bree:
You were my sister
The only family I ever knew
We once played together
When you were but two
Your mom was my mom
Your dad was my dad
You got a new family
But that was something I never had
I watched all your videos
from Proving Science Wrong to Swimming
I knew you through them
As if you were still living
you died that fateful day
and now I have passed too
And I’m hoping that now
finally
I can be with you….
July 25th, 2008 at 5:33 pm
From Daniel to Sarah
I loved you.
I lost you.
I found you.
We were together.
We were happy.
Then I found the note in your suitcase.
Bitch.
July 25th, 2008 at 8:04 pm
From Jonas to Bree:
I wish…
I wish that we met in another places and time…
Where the world was simple and no one can hurt us…
I wish…
I wish that knew you sooner…
So that I could protect you better….
I wish…
I wish that I was string enough to save you…
From the beasts drained your essence away…
I wish…
I wish…
I wish…that I was with you now instead of living in this cold, black world…
July 25th, 2008 at 8:09 pm
From Bree to Jonas:
I wish…
I wish that I met you sooner…
To comfort you in your times of loneliness…
I wish…
I wish that I had stayed…
And be in your arms forever…
I wish…
I wish that my sacrifice wasn’t in vain…
For the demons continue to exist….
I wish…
I wish…
I wish…that I could be with you now and always…instead of in the warm, bright light…alone…
July 25th, 2008 at 8:14 pm
From Gina to Bree:
I wish…
I wish that I could remember…
The time that was stolen from us…
I wish…
I wish that I could have known you better…
Instead of seeing images of a lost age…
I wish…
I wish that we could’ve met…
That my heart could be full and calm…
I wish…
I wish…
I wish…that we were together instead of apart…trapped by our cruel, neverending destiny…
July 25th, 2008 at 8:41 pm
from daniel to sarah
Relationships are hard, especially when they’re never over.
You came back into my life, last October
But I always knew sooner or later, you’d be back.
To take me off my track.
You’ll shake up my life.
Stab my back with a knife,
And leave me to pick up the pieces again.
But this time, I won’t be your friend.
I won’t take you for who you are.
To me you don’t mean anything.
It wasn’t love that I tasted,
It was just too much time wasted.
ehhh… i tried?
July 26th, 2008 at 12:26 am
from daniel to sarah
i had quite a poem written for you
but then you decided to be a poo poo,
trying to give jonas to the order
so there can be another elder,
so you dont get the poem i wrote
and you can go home and take your coat.
(this is what happens when its late and your tired)
July 28th, 2008 at 10:11 pm
From Jennie to QtheC:
I love you like the letter Q
big and round with a curlicue
I love you like the letter t
tasty tickling in a tree
I love you like the letter h
till next we meet, I cannot waitch
I love you like the letter e
storm snug cabin by the sea
I love you like the letter C
take your vitamins, then visit me
July 29th, 2008 at 10:16 pm
Lot’s of good entries, but I think tornadoallie’s “from Daniel to Sarah” was one of the funniest.
August 7th, 2008 at 12:13 pm
Any word on who won this?
August 12th, 2008 at 4:31 am
and the winner is…………….. drum roll please………………
August 14th, 2008 at 2:28 pm
Whatever happened to his contest! I actually sent in an entry and the contest seems to have disappered.
March 14th, 2010 at 9:57 am
Great posting in addition to nice design, is this a normal theme?